Declamation Piece “Conscience”

| September 28, 2009 | 64 Comments

I wept, I cried so hard.  But this tears can’t bring back my sister to  life.  My being brought here by my conscience.  I want to ask forgiveness.  But can she still hear?  O heart, forgive me for what I have done, please bring peace to mind.

Dry leaves were crushed down below.  As if to freshen my memories that her life perished because of my selfishness.

 

She was my only sister.  Since our childhood, I always believed that I was the favorite of our dad.  One night, while I was facing all about to the mirror, with my micro mini, I puffed powder, when I saw Luisa’s face, reflecting in the mirror.  "You can’t get out tonight, Lucille."  I heard a threatening tone from her.  I turned to her, but I can’t resist at her sharp stare at me. "And who says so, my dear sister?" "We are to celebrate Momma’s death anniversary, you know that don’t you?"  In a relaxed and condescending voice, I replied "well I don’t care.  I’m going out to party tonight!"

Then I heard a knock on the door.  I shouted "Help Papa!"  for I knew that it was he.  I pulled my hair, I tore my dress away as I was attacked by a squad of monstrous creatures.  When the door opened the site Papa saw was that Luisa was holding my neck who was trying to make a rescue.  But I cried so hard that made Papa grew to the height of anger.  He threw Luisa to the corner, where the head of my poor sister was hit at the edge of the chair.

I slowly rejoiced for I have made a successful revenge.  But when she lifted, I saw a different sparkle in her tearful eyes. "Ha ha ha ha ha!"  O my, Luisa, she went out of her mind.  I was not able to move, as well as Papa.  Both of us were motionless.  And before we returned to our senses, Luisa ran to the door and proceeded to the open gate of our house.  We followed her calling out her name.  "Luisa!"  "Sister!"  "Luisa"   "Sister" "Luisa the Truck!" "Don’t cross the road, Luisa, the truck don’t Don’t DON’T!"

The next sight I saw was that Luisa was thrown five meters away from the truck.  I ran to her and embraced her.  Blood was all over her face.  In a low but distinct voice she murmured, that made my heart break so much.  She said, "Lucille, please be a good girl.  I love you.  Please be a good girl ‘coz Papa loves you very much."

"Luisa?  Luisa?  Sister… sister!!!"  From that moment I cried so hard for killing my only sister, who loved and cared for me, even at the last moment of her life.

Now can you blame me, for asking God to forgive me?  Forgive me dear God, Forgive me!

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  1. nikki says:

    who wrote this piece?? :)

  2. Lianne says:

    this is my brother’s declamation piece, its so saaaaaddd
    :( :’(

  3. karrel joy says:

    wow!!!!
    it’s so nice…

  4. Roland Joseph S. Austria says:

    I very like this wonderful declamation piece. . . who wrote this one? so sad. .

    but it’s nice

    i like it :)

  5. sevh says:

    it was nice ….who wrote these piece? pls send it to my email i badly needed it ..thanks!

    newei do you know where i can find vendetta ?thanks.

  6. sevh says:

    ..i badly needed it for my speech class hope u can help.! thanks & godspeed!

  7. bleh_ says:

    Lhenn wrote the piece.

    i really love it!

    what a sad ending!

  8. Eunice Vicente says:

    Who wrote this piece?? :) ) please i need it at our englich class..thankyou..

  9. yeyme..(".) says:

    this was my declamation piece. and guess what? i Got a 100% in y grade. thank you so much for the declamation!

  10. ahahlen says:

    can u post a piece of a glimmer of hope

  11. riza says:

    hai!
    nice piece..
    helped me alot..
    i will use this piece for my talent..
    hope i’ll win..
    tnx agen..

  12. faith says:

    I NOW LOVE THE ESSENCE OF DECLAMATION

  13. alysandra says:

    ..gande nitoo…100% ako ihh

  14. Theo Orlando Redoble says:

    thankyou! this will help me at my class.. and btw…. this story is really good sad ending but good

  15. warning!!!!
    you might fall in love with me

  16. patricia says:

    its so so so sad….:(

  17. CejaY.... says:

    i super heart this piece…

    i had the best grade in our English because of it..!

  18. eric cantila says:

    i want to say thank you… to the person who give time and effort to publish it..next week i will use this piece for my speech communication class..so, good luck!!!!! i love…. next time can you post more tragic and melancholy declamation piece?

  19. herbert says:

    It has wrong grammar.

  20. bhe says:

    yah.i have the same comment.some parts were in wrong grammar.i used it in my project in english but didn’t change those parts.hehe.i don’t wanna be accused of plagiarism.xD haha.just kidding!

  21. jinx says:

    Nice but suggestion at the last part….if i to understand it…I suggest instead of saying Can you blame me for asking God to forgive me….why not convince the audience to join you in asking God’s forgiveness….not all about blaming because you are not suppose to be blamed but to be supported with your desire for conversion. Thank you.

  22. Hi po! So beautiful po itong declamation godspeed po sa gumawa kasi po nung prinaktis po namin to ni mama umiyak po kami 9 yrs. old palang po ko.

  23. I really love ko po itong declamation piece sana po mabasa rin po ito ng ibang may kapatid kasi natuto po ako kahit wala po akong kapatid natuto po ako na kailangan silang mahalin have a nice day po! <3

  24. Siguro po lagi po ikaw 1st sa exams para po kasi kayo si mama nagsusulat rin po siya ng ganito

  25. MaCy says:

    a tear dropped from my eye the exact moment i finished readind this freakin’ sad story. And its friggin’ nice!

  26. april gaye acoba says:

    i think its absolutely great!

  27. Purplecharm says:

    ‘oh my ….
    thanks for this declamation . I got the highest grade really really sad and when i recited i cannot refuse to cry there infront of many people
    thank you so much for this declamation…. <3

  28. Purplecharm says:

    and it taught me many lessons that even your sister or brother is always arguing with you they are not just doing it for their own good its because they love and care for you. thnks again…

  29. yzie says:

    omg! so nice..
    it made ma tears fall..
    gotta give this to ma sis for her talent^^

    very nice piece..

  30. dana says:

    so sad…very touching…huhu..

  31. andrea says:

    this declamation makes me emotional
    most of all i got the 2nd place in this declamation

  32. unknown says:

    whew.! i will take this piece for my declamation on november 13, 2010.. hope i’ll win with this piece.. :S

  33. princess says:

    huh hard to find

  34. mars says:

    can i borrow this piece?..and translate it..:)thanks

  35. kyla says:

    ito po ang piece q sa ngayong aabut na january 24/2011 .. i h0pe many of them will love 8 .. g0d blesses me ..

  36. kyla says:

    yep2 .. aq ang mai pinka mlking grade sa english tnx 2 this piece .. who wrote his piece ?! tnx to her/him ..

  37. tarhen says:

    ..hey! this piece is very nice.
    ..it’s gonna be our declamation peice on the literary-musical contest.
    ..the name of the author is required to be submitted..
    ..pls give me his or her name:)

  38. tarhen:) says:

    ..hey! this piece is very nice.
    ..it’s gonna be my piece on our school’s literary-musical contest…
    ..but the name of the author is required to be submitted ..
    so pls…give me his or her name:)

  39. at bleh_ : Lhen didnt wrote this piece!!! she just uploaded it! duhh!!! well I want to know who wrote this piece…its soo sad :’(

    to those that present this piece & got a high grade or won in a contest… uhmm do u have to cry while reciting it??? pls reply back!

  40. kyla says:

    yup.. i cried ..

  41. ej lyn songaling says:

    this is very nice! and soooo emotional…………….but i need the piece of “the visit” can you give me the copy?………….please…………..i badly need it………………really bad!!!! THANKS ALOT!

  42. ocir says:

    i like it

  43. faith says:

    Oh my Gosh! I’m going to recite it at school!

  44. famela says:

    i like this one soooo much!!

  45. i like this declemation piece the first yime i read this im very very like this piece tnx for writing this declemation piece i love it!

  46. nina says:

    This declamation is amazing very amazing:))

  47. sayuri says:

    This declamation is amazing very amazing:))

  48. sms lover says:

    i really like it .
    sounds amazing.. publish me another one ha..

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